Loco motives, loco mind
Can’t stop it now
It’s loco time
Once a child, t’was undefiled
Trains of thought, Now running wild
Pick up speed, Going downhill fast
Gone too long, Now out of track
Once smooth tracks, Are all but flat
A few more bumps, And I shall crash
Nothin left to do, ‘Cept ditch this train
Better get off now, Or go insane
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-bryan j bailey
very impressive, thank you for sharing!
I love your blog and your words, they are fresh air to me!
I agree with Ji, this poem is very impressive at the same time it’s definetly got this beat.
I also feel its very powerful, especially at the time you wrote it.
I am enjoying reading your poems, and thank you so much for sharing them with us all.
Ana Goncalves Expressiveworld.com
This one is over 12 years old. I was close to the brink at this point of my life, way out of control too.
But one thing that I have tried to do in all my writings, is tie in my own life with how I feel the world is going at the same time. So in essence, the words can be directed inward towards myself, and also outwards, towards mankind.
-bryan